Swimsuit Model: Oni

Meh. This is what I get for trying to mimic a body drawn in a How To Draw Manga book... However, this is an excellent pic if you wanna know what Oni Sanosuke, from my SSX fic "Return To The Slopes" looks like. I didn't make the background, but I drew this and basically, the only thing that I did in computer was color it. I think it's traditional enough.

I don't want critique on this because I know it sucks. It's just a character reference.